Retirement 'rough narrative' recorded

I've recorded a rough version of the radio presenter's narrative to get an idea of timings. The first part was around 75 seconds long. With 10 scenes to cover that's around 7.5 seconds a scene which is more than plenty. Scenes being:
1. Radio being switched on
2. Leaving house
3. On train
4. Walking up to office
5. At desk
6. Looking at, signing retirement card
7. Leaving office
8. On train
9. Arriving house
10. Switching off radio and lights
Will record the second half tomorrow and work out timings

Script sent to Patrick Mounteney our Radio Presenter.