Feedback received on Fragile edit

Received positive feedback from my last edit of Dexterity Film's upcoming short film 'Fragile'.

A few things to work on mainly around the new title:

* Taking moon out of Fragile title (unless it is my computer and that should appear after)
* Preferable if the title could shatter into pieces more slowly, not all at the same time
* Shot held for longer on Jo smiling at the end after looking at the To Let sign and the house before she walks off.

Removing the moon is a shame but easily done. Making the title even slower will be interesting - might use the increased frame rate method instead of project settings in Cinema 4D. That way gravity is normal just slowed down. Will try 200fps and see how that looks.

Breaking the pieces at different times will be tricky but I think the best way will be to use different size cones hitting the text at different times but far apart from each other so we get partial breakage. Need to work on that first before the speed tests.

Holding on the shot of Jo longer will only be possible if there is more footage to do so with. Don't want to introduce any freeze frames. Have just extended the edit to include more of the close up shot and hope this is what the director wants!